Innocent Manga Girl

This was actually a copy of a picture from one of Mark Crilley's sped up drawing videos.  I didn't trace it though.  I literally kept pausing the video until I had all of the guidelines that I needed, then I watched the rest of the video.  From there I tried to copy all of the lines that was in the video.  This was drawn using different types of lines, with the exception of the eyes.  This took me about 1 hour and 30 minutes without shading and another 30 minutes to shade.  This took me about 2 hours total.  I actually don't have this picture anymore.  One of my friends at my school really wanted the picture, so I let her have it.  That picture was in the front of her binder for most of the school year and she told me that a lot of people liked it and I have a talent for some of this stuff.  I do agree, but I always see room for improvement.  I hope you like the picture.  Tell me things that I could work on in the comments please.  Thank you and I hope you all are having a good summer!